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Family Travel: Jeju

My family went to an island called jeju.We got there by a plane.It was my first time to took a plane.It was fastnating!We explored caves,beaches,and beautiful sites.

Jeju has many beautiful nature.It has caves,rocks,trees,fruits,flowers,oh did i mentioned beaches?Anyway, there is a sweet fruit called hanrabong.It tastes like tangerins,but its shell is much thicker and it olny grows on jeju!And theres a mountain called han ra mountain.It is the 3th highst mountains in korea!

Jeju has a diffrent culture back in the old days,people put web on their roofs then it can't flew away by the strong wind?And they have signs on thier doors?I think Jeju's culture is weird.....but I will write anoher journy of my family's tales.

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김*지 2026-01-22 01:08 PM
정0진 님 제가 확인해 보았는데,이해를 잘못하신 것 같아요.저는 조개의 껍질이 아니라 과일 껍질이 뜻이 었거든요....다음엔 제가 이해가 잘되게 쓸려고 노력 할께요.감사합니다
김*지 2026-01-22 11:57 AM
아 제가 잘못한거는 다음 편에서 참고할게요. 그리고 남겨주셔서 감사합니다
정*진 2026-01-22 05:13 AM
took 보단 ride로 바꾸는게 더 자연스러운거 같고, 문장부호 쓰면 띄어쓰기 부탁 예를 들어 ice, cream 뭐 이런식. 그리고 hanrabong이 아니라 hallabong 라네요. 한라산은 Hallasan Mountain 이고, 3th가 아니라 3rd고요, another에서 t가 빠졌네요. 그리고 제가 4번째 줄을 이해를 못했어요.. 귤 얘기 하다 갑자기 조개 이야기가 왜 나요죠..?
김*지 2026-01-21 09:33 AM
에엑따 이거 쓰는데 벌써 3명? 감사
김*지 2026-01-21 09:31 AM
아 그리고 오타 있으면 댓글로 알려주셈 그리고 나 초등임